Chapter 20 - p.12
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Leonardo is nicer to Renoir than Raphael ever was.
However, it can also be said that Raphael simply looks after Renoir in his own ways.
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Some tidbits about this chapter's progress so far.
Posted 21:30Mon 26 July
by Tigerfog
I'm going to cut the script of this chapter by half so we can get faster to the Leo+Japan chapter. Things are look good, because:
1) Less is not necessarily bad. The characters' interaction will be "just enough" and not "jumped the shark further into mary-sue realms".
2) This chapter takes place in the sewers so I won't have to do many backgrounds, crazy angles, etc.
3) I have 10 pages of CHP21 (Leo Japan chapter) already inked, so once CHP20 is over, we're immediately going to Leo's side.